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In August, I paid $169 for to have my resume professionally written; order #*******. The policy for revisions is within a 30day period of time. However, to truly experience the results of applying with the finished product; it takes longer than 30 days. After not receiving any invitations for interviews; I decided to get a second opinion. Please see below:
From the way the resume is worded, you come across as a "doer," as opposed to an "achiever." Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not results-based. This means that they tell what you did, instead of what you achieved. This is a common mistake for non-professional resume writers. To be effective and create excitement, a great resume helps the hiring executive picture you delivering similar achievements at his or her company. Here are some examples of task-based sentences in your resume:
I would expect that a professional resume writer charging $169 for service would know this information.
We are sorry to hear that your experience with us did not satisfy you. We are normally known for our exceptional attention to detail, and we regret that we missed the mark. We ensure that our professional resume writers tailor the customer's resume/CV according to their targeted position, with special attention to their achievements.
Someone from our team will contact you in order to resolve this matter. We would like to attend to it and make sure this case is properly investigated. Thank you for contacting us.