Floretta L.

The introduction and conclusion were satisfactory, providing a clear overview and a solid summary...However! The body paragraphs lacked a cohesive structure. The progression of ideas seemed disjointed at times, making it challenging to follow a logical flow. Moreover, I noticed a few instances where the arguments lacked proper transitions between points, affecting the essay's overall coherence.despite delivering the essay's overall coherence. Despite delivering the essay on time, the inconsistency in structural organization is a notable concern
There's a need for improvement to ensure a more consistent and coherent essay structure for a better overall experience