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Sofie M.

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11/8/21
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I must admit that I am not very good at argumentation. While I can accept my weaknesses, I cannot say the same thing about my prof lol. He´s really so picky and annoying at times. Yet, I think that his comments are right to the point in my case. Writing an argumentative paper in philosophy about the morality of some Kantian concepts I really lost track of my thoughts and by the end of the text, I could not formulate a conclusion thoroughly. Yet, since it was only the first draft of the paper and I submitted it to my prof to get some comments, I really received a relevant feedback. However, I still did not understand how to fix my paper so that my prof would give me at least C or better B. He highlighted many places in red and told me to change my argumentation completely because it lacked substance. I could not implement his feedback though, so I had no other option rather than to ask some custom writing service experts to help me deal with that. As soon as I submitted the file with the text and the professor´s feedback, one of the writers who was particularly interested in my paper asked some questions about the sources. I also uploaded the sources that had to be mentioned in the paper. It took us only 5 minutes to discuss the entire paper and the writer imediately accepted it. I guess I was lucky to have such a caring expert. In a couple of hours I received a revised version of my paper. The writer even explained how and why he changed some points of argumentation in the different places of my paper. I resubmitted this essay to my prof and in a couple of days I received a new feedback from him. He told me that I managed to refine my argumentation pretty well, and now it was just up to the point! I was so happy when I got an A even though I initially did not expect that!

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Great your professor graded the paper so high! Waiting for your next order, Sofie!

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